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Hello,

Wasn't sure how to communicate this. A good speech today but Ms. Haley used the word 'amazing' twice. Once is enough for this overused and not-very-descriptive adjective. How about formidable, fabulous, incredible, strong, etc?

Other quibble is a reference to the pastor at the Emmanuel Baptist Church. She said he was a leading (am paraphrasing) minister in the black community. How about 'leading minister in the community'? Really, wasn't that what he was? and leave out the race part.

Thanks
Leslie Kingsley

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